Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

I mean I will say... I do not like Rina. It's like the one thing Unknown was right about. Rina as a character sucks... But I don't know if that's intentional or not. The reviews though are still fun.
 
Rina is...complicated

One has to read Generic body control story to really understand what I intended to do with her. But that would be cruel and unusual punishment.

I can say though that Rina is the most evil protagonist I ever written.
 
Gambio said:
Rina is...complicated

One has to read Generic body control story to really understand what I intended to do with her. But that would be cruel and unusual punishment.

I can say though that Rina is the most evil protagonist I ever written.
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Can confirm. She's more a better-disguised Pearl Forrester than a Mike Nelson.
 
I mean serious props to this story... It got me to masturbate reading it as well... So that's a thing...

That might have been TMI I dunno... But I will say only like three stories on this entire site actually got me hot like that, so... Props.
 
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Zeebop said:
I don't think LLNO has even made Marcie or Gina breathe heavy.
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The very first segment did actually suceed in making Gina a bit hot and bothered. But that was back when Gina was still sweet and innocent(and also sexually frustrated by Marcie)

CurvyLinesEverywhere said:
Seriously. We have all the tools we need in order to not only arouse them both in the same story, but possibly even in the same scene.
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As a heads up, catering to them will usually have the exact opposite effect.


TheLeherengin said:
I mean serious props to this story... It got me to masturbate reading it as well... So that's a thing...

That might have been TMI I dunno... But I will say only like three stories on this entire site actually got me hot like that, so... Props.
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It's a pretty big accomplishment!

I probably can't even share the depraved shit that gets me off. At least Marcie and Gina have more normal taste.
 
Gambio said:
As a heads up, catering to them will usually have the exact opposite effect.
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Gee, if only somebody knew how to spring it on them like some sort of... how did Gina put it? Ah, yes...

Gina Walker said:
“That's not it! The fucker cheated! All this time all we do is talk about muffins and satisfy the authors perverse tickle fetish and then suddenly there is this really nice scene where the girls are having fun while Shiroe was watching like the cuck he is. That was hot and my hands just started to move on their own, ugh! It was like a fucking sex ambush! Fuck you, Curvy!”
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Gambio said:
I probably can't even share the depraved shit that gets me off. At least Marcie and Gina have more normal taste.
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Oh, you mean like your well-established taste for... (checks Gambio's history; suddenly realizes Gambio has liked every chapter they've ever read) ...security-through-obscurity? Fuck me...
 
JohnTitor45 said:
I think she is referring to the anime style and how people say it might as well be an anime.
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Which is silly imo. Either everything is an anime, because anime just means animation (which is too broad for anime fans), or only Japanese animations are anime (which includes animations that have a Western style).
 
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