Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  2. AlexandraS90

    AlexandraS90 Really Experienced

    King Edward has the edge in overall number of chapters, Fyreant's story has the edge in y'know, being well-written.
     
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  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Marcie and Gina will be the judge of that.

    Your story has a walking shark, so that already gives you a massive advantage.
     
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  4. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  5. Iam_DickMan

    Iam_DickMan Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Yo I put out a short chapter on masochist mode.
     
  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Excellent, I just approved it

    Shame they didn't make it to the Sephiroth tattoo and yes I knew they have fuck all reference for what that is.
     
  7. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

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  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Keep in mind that there have been responses that start off with the embedded image of a gaping asshole, so you're probably doing fine.
     
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  9. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

    The only gaping asshole is Al, so I think we're good then.
     
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  10. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    eh, at least it didn't feature Al and Ruby fucking
     
  11. Dissonant Soundtrack

    Dissonant Soundtrack Really Really Experienced

    If Al fucked in my story I think Gina would have jumped through a pane glass window.
     
  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  13. Gambio

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  14. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  15. Warden-Yarn15

    Warden-Yarn15 Really Really Experienced

    Would it be bad if I ask if, if ever I have the motivation to write another horror-ish story, would you hold it off until October?
     
  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I actually contemplated doing seasonal appropriate segments, but it is rather hard to get this to work, lol

    But yes, if it is something horror themed I can shift schedules around so it comes out on Halloween
     
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  17. Warden-Yarn15

    Warden-Yarn15 Really Really Experienced

    I can understand why, I imagine that life + seasonal holidays and trying to find the stories for them is a massive waste of time.

    It just feels like I need to make up for last year, to be honest.
     
  18. Gambio

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  19. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Awesome. I'll need to step up work on my stories so I can help fill it back up.
     
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  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    @Gambio
    I know the rule was changed to only stories that are 10 chapters deep, but how would you feel about making an exception for Bad Sex when it's finished?
     
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