This is something I've been thinking about a lot - the way I've been writing, I've also been trying to build up tension or anticipation a bit before a payoff, and I keep worrying I'm taking too long to get into the action. It's good to know I'm not on totally the wrong track for everyone!
Though that can have unintended effect of stopping in order to scratch that particular itch and delay publication.
So female Demi-fiend and a femboy whipping a muscular catgirl while a pixie sticks her head in her pussy is doing it right?