TheLowKing
Really Really Experienced
If you're getting hot writing it, you're doing it right.
This is something I've been thinking about a lot - the way I've been writing, I've also been trying to build up tension or anticipation a bit before a payoff, and I keep worrying I'm taking too long to get into the action. It's good to know I'm not on totally the wrong track for everyone!That's going to be fairly subjective; personally, I tend to need a lot of narrative build-up and one or two of my favorite kinks - and what I find sexy you might find overly mechanical. One of my more popular sex scene chapters, for example, is buried eight chapters deep in a story and without that plot driving it might not do anything for you.
If you're getting hot writing it, you're doing it right.
Good things come to those who wait.Though that can have unintended effect of stopping in order to scratch that particular itch and delay publication.![]()
Good things come to those who wait.![]()
If you're getting hot writing it, you're doing it right.
So female Demi-fiend and a femboy whipping a muscular catgirl while a pixie sticks her head in her pussy is doing it right?