Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Haha, I was actually planning to do another review of Lois Lane soon, now that the backlog is cleared.
     
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  2. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    I have been thinking of having a Lindsey and Susan read CHYOA.
     
  3. merkros

    merkros CHYOA Guru

    Soon: "Lindsey and Susan reads Marcie and Gina reads CHYOA"
     
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  4. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Marcie and Gina reads CHYOA would need to be at least 10 chapters and they'd all need to be written by Gambio.
     
  5. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I'm getting a headache just thinking about it.
     
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  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Lois & Blaze read Marcie & Gina read CHYOA 2: The Phallus Menace
     
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  7. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Well, I'd need it to be at least ten chapters deep with each of those ten chapters being done by you so unless you manage to do a 9 part review on something, its quiet unlikely.

    I'm not sure if I'm ready yet.

    I am wondering if a should just read the whole thing through and do a complete review like Gambio or if I should split it into multiple parts for every fifteen chapters like JohnJacobs.

    Is that a suggestion for something Lindsey and Susan to read?
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    It's a joke on Lois & Blaze read Marcie & Gina read CHYOA, punning on Star Wars Episode II: The Phantom Menace and Gina's well-known detestation of all things penis-related. Although if you want to have a go at Lois Lane's Night Out, by all means, have at it. Remember to pace yourself.
     
    Last edited: Jun 30, 2021
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  9. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Thanks, I think I'll do that.
     
  10. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    So are you and exxxidor456 co-authors or something? Also, isn't Phantom Menace Episode I?
     
  11. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    You fool! Never explain a joke! Now you have doomed us all!

    And yup, I slotted you in for the review after the current one, so it will be out in about a week.
     
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  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Gambio did a review, so I did a review of the review, and now Gambio is going to do another review...
     
  13. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    I mean are you and exxxidor co-authors of Lois Lane's Night Out? I think I'm gonna give reviewing it a shot. I mean, I already read through.
     
  14. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Someday... Someday I will actually finally finish Emily's day 1 portion of Dustbin... I swear it's happening. There's just so much left to do... Why... Why did I make Emily's so varied?
     
  15. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    ....
    Did I promise I would do a follow up then? It has been so long, lol


    Alright, since this is apparently a thing now, I want it to be done in a orderly fashion, so I'm opening up Masochist Mode(MM)

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/actually-shut-the-fuck-up,-because-there-is-something-next:-Masochist-Mode.967720

    Apply now and get 10% off!


    Oh yeah, next review is out

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Naive-and-Erotic-Roommates,-by-BBBlooster.967733
     
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  16. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I believe you did... I can recheck I guess...

    Edit: You said you'd continue when I finished a path... Which fair... That's going to be a while though since even finishing everyone's first day is already going to take me forever.
     
  17. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Yeah that sounds more like it, I don't like this parts buisness

    I have plenty of follow ups to do for stories that are years away from finished, so that's not too out of the ordinary
     
  18. BBBlooster

    BBBlooster Experienced

    OOOOHHHH!!

    I was more excited than I’d like to admit when i got the notification. Great read! Marcie and Gina are amazing as always, and I appreciate the time you put in to write it considering my story isn’t one of the more popular ones on the site.
    When i hit say, 50 chapters? id be interested in reading a follow up if you were inclined to make one. Judging by my upload rate it should only take me a couple… uh… years.

    The idea of doing a reply chapter is tempting, I’ll have to do some thinking on that.

    as for Masochist Mode, I’m 100% down for that. Make me cry.
     
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  19. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Haha, glad you liked it. In terms of the likes per chapter ratio yours is actually one of the more popular ones featured here.

    In general I only do follow up's once a story is finished, but then again, who knows how things look in a couple of years? Ask me again when you get there.

    Alright, I put you down for MM
     
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  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    exxxidor started it, and a few other folks have chimed in. But Lois Lane's Night Out is 4,152 chapters and I've written 4,115 of them. So...99.1% of it is me.