Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    You do have a point, goddamnit
     
  2. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  3. JerkGently

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  4. Warden-Yarn15

    Warden-Yarn15 Really Really Experienced

    From the looks of it, JerkGently's the next customer before the backlog becomes dry.

    Is the backlog being empty a good thing by the way?
     
  5. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    And here I had envisioned that Gina would get a zero backlog as present for christmas lol

    Sure! Added you.

    It definitely seems to encourage authors to submit a story.

    Technically I could do a lot of follow ups, but I don't really want to do them without the authors consent. It's a bit of a vexing situation.
     
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  6. TheLeherengin

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  7. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    well that's a promising name lol

    added you
     
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  9. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I should do another Masochist Mode review, I've just been exhausted lately.
     
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  10. saktongmanyak

    saktongmanyak Experienced

    Giving my consent for continued ridicule. I always welcome feedback, so feel free to jump back into my branch of the AMA anytime you'd like.
     
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  11. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Eh no rush, your reviews are always very elaborate


    What I might actually do is follow ups on stories on masochist mode, in case I ever run out of backlog.

    Of course, follow ups can always be manually requested as well to jump the line. That said, there is still a three month waiting period before the same story can be featured again, so your request is only mentally noted ;P
     
  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  14. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Ha cum balloons... My writing off site is still worse in terms of horrific snuff deaths, but that's pretty up there.

    Also yes I am proud and will gladly hold onto my crown of most fucked up snuff porn.
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    ...you know, snuff is one of the things I haven't done much of in LLNO. Not really my thing.
     
  16. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    When I'm allowed too, I write very very dark stuff... Snuff, non-con, vore etc...
     
  17. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Well, that's appropriately horrifying


    I still think its kinda against the rules. i mean if you sexualise it, at least.
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Well, to be fair I usually follow it up immediately with some form of resurrection. Except for that one time Supergirl disintegrated Lois Lane on accident in mid-orgasm when she lost control of her powers.
     
  19. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    And here I was expecting Lois and Lane to just spend the whole review talking about that lol


    I like your review style, simply by virtue of being unique. To elaborate on what I wrote on my last comment, I don't see the sex as an issue as long as the main focus is clearly on the reviewed story. Basically the sex should be the framing device, but never usurp the main topic.

    Of course, this isn't exclusive to Lois and Blaze having sex, but any other tangent, regardless of subject.


    Please note that this is just my personal opinion on the matter. There are no hard rules to follow. Its called masochist mode after all and reviewers doing whatever they want is certainly appropriate.