Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

waaay ahead of you

Oh, and I probably should add about Masochist Mode:

If anyone decides it becomes too much, I can remove that person from the list
 
I did give it three tries. Hit two bad ends and a dead end. So...such is life. Seriously though, I'm not sure if I did well given the format; a kind of "Let's Play" seemed more appropriate than an overall review.
 
Honestly probably yeah, Dustbin and Hunters are super non-linear and Emily especially is basically like several different paths that branch extremely rapidly. Like each possible choice given regarding Officer Halo except one leads to entirely separate branches and the "phones" and "Evidence" choice in the "she can't do it" branch itself gives you two very different branches.

Edit: I used to be a huge fan of the Fighting Fantasy Game Books and they are definitely the style I'm trying to emulate in Dustbin and Hunters to a lesser degree.

Another Edit: I also should note in case I haven't already that Hunters is not up for review. At least not until I get the first actual hunt completed.
 
TheLeherengin said:
Honestly probably yeah, Dustbin and Hunters are super non-linear and Emily especially is basically like several different paths that branch extremely rapidly. Like each possible choice given regarding Officer Halo except one leads to entirely separate branches and the "phones" and "Evidence" choice in the "she can't do it" branch itself gives you two very different branches.

Edit: I used to be a huge fan of the Fighting Fantasy Game Books and they are definitely the style I'm trying to emulate in Dustbin and Hunters to a lesser degree.
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I can't throw any stones when it comes to "branching extremely rapidly," though the way our stories are set up is very different. If/when I ever finish LLNO, I plan to do a Fighting Fantasy-style story.

[/edit] And no worries, I'm not trying to review any story a body doesn't want reviewed.
 
Zeebop said:
I can't throw any stones when it comes to "branching extremely rapidly," though the way our stories are set up is very different. If/when I ever finish LLNO, I plan to do a Fighting Fantasy-style story.

[/edit] And no worries, I'm not trying to review any story a body doesn't want reviewed.
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Would you be willing to review either Dark Lord or Lindsey Shepard: The Path To Justice if I put one of them up for Masochist Mode?
 
I'd definitely like to submit my new story, The Bloodhound Rides Again, once it's got a few more chapters. Maybe once there've been 2/3 arcs, or "bounties" completed.
 
Finally unknown7 will receive some justice! cackles maniacally

AlexandraS90 said:
I'd definitely like to submit my new story, The Bloodhound Rides Again, once it's got a few more chapters. Maybe once there've been 2/3 arcs, or "bounties" completed.
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Sure, whenever you ready. I'm also looking forward of doing a follow up on King Edward
 
Gambio said:
Finally unknown7 will receive some justice! cackles maniacally



Sure, whenever you ready. I'm also looking forward of doing a follow up on King Edward
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I also really need to get that one finished! Haven't written a chapter since Edward was swept out to sea a couple of months ago. Dude probably needs a warm blanket and a coffee.


Unknown7 said:
Apparently, sex scenes can be longer than one line.
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I'm sorry about that comment, it was a little pissy. To be fair, I have enjoyed other things about Dark Lord, and actually spent a much bigger chunk of my Saturday reading it than I intended.

Gambio said:
This time I learned that Ashley is apparently not a female only name.

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Touched-By-Magic,-by-HighGrove.981494
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I mean...

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AlexandraS90 said:
I also really need to get that one finished! Haven't written a chapter since Edward was swept out to sea a couple of months ago. Dude probably needs a warm blanket and a coffee.




I'm sorry about that comment, it was a little pissy. To be fair, I have enjoyed other things about Dark Lord, and actually spent a much bigger chunk of my Saturday reading it than I intended]
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Its fine, I actually thought it was funny. Does coffee exist in that fantasy setting?
 
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