Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Huh weird amount of grammar and spelling errors in this one? The review I mean... Like you managed to generally be pretty good about spelling things properly in Marcie and Gina up to this point... Did you write this one in a hurry or something?

Anyway aside from that... Interesting review. I haven't read this story before, might have to check it out now, sounds like a mindfuck.
 
My favourite thing is that I added new chapters while you were writing this, making it sound like Marcie and Gina are lying about me not adding chapters for a while.

Oh and "Marcie neglected to mention that this was the annual rapist convention" made me laugh.
 
Absolutely perfect. Will have to do a reply chapter as Rosie and explain that her and Jane are going to get around to spending some quality time with "Gina", honest.

Edit: did it as "Gina"
 
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DeviantChap said:
My favourite thing is that I added new chapters while you were writing this, making it sound like Marcie and Gina are lying about me not adding chapters for a while.

Oh and "Marcie neglected to mention that this was the annual rapist convention" made me laugh.
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Yeah, I usually write the draft, the day I finished reading and then spend the week or so touching things up. I was cursing quite a bit when you suddenly started to add chapters lol. But i rather keep this types of disparities in. Marcie and Gina aren't really known for doing their due diligence after all.

Also, holy cow this was the fastest answer chapter ever, You probably going to hold that reccord for a long time, so congratulations.
 
Since I don't release them on a fixed time, this would be difficult to accomplish.

But yeah Tower of Voices will be next, should hopefully be good.
 
I mean, the longest route is 16 chapters (not including the intro page of course) so that's better than my story lol

Edit: also most of your choices go somewhere
 
Eeeh!!!! This makes me so happy :D I didn't even think about the fact that this would technically be the second of my stories they read and also 2/2 out of stories of mine they've read with no porn for them to enjoy (Although of course Dustbin had porn they just missed like all of it.)

Also Engin XD I honestly cannot for the life of me remember where the name TheLeherengin came from. It's just been the name I've used when writing pornographic works pretty much ever since I first started doing so.
 
You got lucky i didn't go with the original plan to call you engine lol


The story got a bit of the short end of the stick this time around as I really wanted to focus on the forum discussion instead, so I apologize. This is also a rare instance where I personally really like Yulia, but she is more of a meh character for both Marcie and Gina.
 
I mean I imagine there really isn't that much to say about the story itself anyway. It is indeed as stated mostly simply a reaction to the forum comments.

I am glad you like Yulia. I do feel like characters are where most of my work shines. I really enjoy creating characters.
 
Unfortunately, at this rate I don't know when (or if!) the path you originally picked on Lois Lane's Night Out might finish. If you get hard up for material, you could go back and pick one of the longer ones.
 
Zeebop said:
Unfortunately, at this rate I don't know when (or if!) the path you originally picked on Lois Lane's Night Out might finish. If you get hard up for material, you could go back and pick one of the longer ones.
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B-but how will I cope when I can't complain about them Dick-girls?

Alright, if I clear the backlog before you finish that path, I'm gonna feature a new one.
 
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