Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    I was actually very tempted to have Marcie and Gina join in, but i figured they would just abuse the other commentors.

    ...of course that would happen if they do a segment anyway.

    Sure, will be another very Meta one, but that's par for the course by now. Just tell me when you're ready.
     
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  2. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Oh wow... I was not expecting an affirmative on that one. XD. Also while I have no doubts that you would not abuse the system, even if just because you seem dedicated to playing the characters properly. I don't think I could in good conscience allow you to make suggestions as three distinct characters :D
     
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  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Ah yes, that did briefly cross my mind as well. Marcie and Gina would cancel each other out anyways, making the whole endeavor completly pointless

    Not sure if I ever specified it in this thread, but I have no issue doing different stories from the same author. I do want to give new authors precedence tough.

    Altough I haven't really figured out a working system for that. I think as long as I didn't get a huge backlog I will just do them in order.
     
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  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Speaking as someone with a huge backlog, I think whatever system is easiest for you and meets your goals is fine.
     
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  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I was more concerned about the nature of the story and how weird it would be to review, I figured you didn't have a problem with different stories from the same author.
     
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  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Eh, It will be another experimental segment, but that's fine by me.

    The only downside is that Marcie and Gina get to complain about me.
     
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  7. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    XD indeed.
     
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  8. Gambio

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  9. MissNix

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    Hahaha Technically I have a futa scene where both characters have dicks and a pussy. And the MC can fuck themselves. I did start writing a rough draft of Liz coming in as a female but never finished it. I might now. There are plenty of times I can do that. Heck maybe I could make threads for some of the other guys being dared to take them. To be honest i went with the breeder pill which is a niche of them and went with the brain wants it and craves it more so never focused on fish out of water. I should though. Thanks for the review. If I ever add new chapters would you be up for a follow up? Lol but yeah nice job.
     
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  10. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    You do not want to hear Gina's oppinion on "Dickgirls" lol

    Gina has developed into quite the militant lesbian, I apologise for that.

    Sure, I can do a follow up, altough, it would have to be once you finished a path.

    I tried doing multiple segments on the same story, but it didn't work. I tend to summarise stuff, which doesn't make for an entertaining read.
     
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  11. DeviantChalice

    DeviantChalice Really Experienced

    Some routes are ten chapters deep. Many are unfinished but it looks like you have quite a queue so roast my depraved smut at your leisure.
     
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  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Added you

    Yeah, got a decent backlog, with my current pace I should get to your story in about a month, so you have time to add some more.
     
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  13. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Ooh I like A Party Gone Wrong. It's definitely one of the hotter stories I've read on here.
     
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  14. DeviantChalice

    DeviantChalice Really Experienced

    Feel free to send me your feedback so I can continue to be bad at taking compliments. Just obviously not in this thread lol
     
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  15. Gambio

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  16. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    If nothing else I guess this idea gives you a reason to read lots of different story types.
    Also lol that first picture, nice. Also making a map of a story you read to criticize it is some dedication. I tip my hat to you. God I can't wait to finish Emily's day one, but I have so much work to do left... Why did I have to make her path so much more branchy than Ruby's?

    Also I guess technically Tower of Voices is past the ten chapter mark now :D But I'm gonna wait until we pass the first floor before actually suggesting it.
     
  17. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Definitely, I wouldn't have checked out most of the stories featured on Gina and Marcie Read otherwise and there is some pretty cool stuff here. The only downside is that I'm not reading more on stuff before I do a follow up. Bit of a shame really, but I like to have these reviews fresh.

    At first I almost wanted that first picture to be some really freaky shit, but now that i have an audience I feel compelled to hide my powerlevel.

    Also I like maps.

    Well, we are almost done with the first floor, right? So shouldn't take that long.
     
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  18. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Yep shouldn't be long before we're past the first floor. Floors gonna start expanding pretty rapidly. First floor has like 4 total rooms, floor two gonna have like 6 I think. Third like 10... I dunno don't have my notes and just woke up, but yeah. Floors gonna get bigger and more dangerous/rewarding.
     
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  19. AlexandraS90

    AlexandraS90 Really Experienced

    Respect to Marcie and Gina for pretty much going through my entire 200+ chapter story and doing their entry on it in the time it took me to add like one chapter.
     
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  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    In hindsight, i probably could have paced myself better. 2 Chapters per day for two weeks and then the last 170 in three days wasn't my best notion.
     
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