Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    I have to start a new story and have it devastated by Marice and Gina. *Tries to kill his writer's block with an excessive amount of violence*
     
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  2. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    No rush, between the backlog and the follow ups, i should be good for at least two months

    Also thanks for adding to the "how many ways are there to spell Marcie wrong?" count
     
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  3. TheLeherengin

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    I don't understand how anyone could misspell Marsie's name...
     
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  4. NaughtyOppa

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    Surely Marzi is spelled the way it's pronounced?
     
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  5. Almax

    Almax Really Experienced

    I think it's really really cool what a nice lil community thingy this story's become. I haven't seen this level of consistent interaction between people here before. It's very nice how everybody's kinda getting involved and having a good time around this, and really sweet seeing how many people are goin' for it. I'm not really good for big group interactions like this, but I wanted to let everybody (especially Gambio for makin' it) know that this whole thing is really awesome to observe and I'm really glad I accidentally volunteered for it so that I got to see everyone having a fun time better.
     
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  6. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I agree. I love community stuff like this.
     
  7. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    I definitely didn't expect to get that much traction with it, so that's pretty cool. "Hard candy" also got plenty of attention as a result, so the moral of the story, if you want people to pay attention to you, abuse them.

    Incidentally, I kinda have Chapter 3 of "Becoming a warrior" ready, but initially intended to post it when new story requests slowed down. That clearly did not happen, so I need to stop dragging me feet. You get it this week.
     
  8. Almax

    Almax Really Experienced

    I am actually nervous to hear this and I do not know why. But ya don't need to rush it or anything if you've got a plan, don't worry about that! Thank you for the thought either way, though, that's very very cool.
     
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  9. Gambio

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  10. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Wait how did you... Lol Monika and Gina read... Amazing...

    Jesus that was Meta...

    Who's Ora?

    also...

    “Very well, those cupcakes where of passing quality, so I shall grant you this boon.”

    “I am sure Sayori will be glad to hear it. Of course if you ever want to visit, I would be happy to accommodate you.”

    Sayori made cupcakes? Not Natsuki? I am appalled at this mischaracterization :D

    Also the line about leaving Sayori Hanging is terrible and I love it.
     
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  11. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I heard people like meta so I put meta on your meta.

    ...god damnit. I keep mixing up the two. Oh well, it's Monika so i just chalk it up as meta commentary, hohoho


    Ora is...well the fact that she speaks in bold should give you a clue.
     
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  12. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Oh she's the... Like... "God" from Hard candy isn't she? That makes sense.
     
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  13. Gambio

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  14. Almax

    Almax Really Experienced

    Thank you! It's really super cool to me that this is even bein' written, and then when I read what specifically was written, it's even cooler. I'm so glad you're having fun with the story, and I really hope it keeps being fun for you as you go on with it, if you choose to! Thanks again for spending the time to do this sort of thing, you're pretty rad in my opinion, and I'm running out of words, so I will cease momentarily. I hope whatever you eat next is incredibly tasty!
     
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  15. TheLeherengin

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    I remember reading Becoming a Warrior and my "debbie" is still a virgin and has like 100% purity or whatever still... I like that that's an option and I like that I torture myself by avoiding sexy situations despite reading this story supposedly for the sexy parts.
     
  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Oh on that subject Gina still sits at 72% purity, that's pretty impressive for her.

    Luckily she doesn't care for guys, so thats like 50% of all the sex scenes erased.
     
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  17. Almax

    Almax Really Experienced

    Hey, thank you so much, that's really so awesome to hear that ya had a good time with it and got all immersed and stuff!
     
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  18. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Thank you for creating such a great story.
     
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  19. Almax

    Almax Really Experienced

    Aw, dude, that's way too kind, thank you a bunch! That's just made me really extra happy. I hope you have an awesome rest of your day!
     
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  20. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Glad to hear it. You too.

    Also... Huh... I wonder... When The Tower of Voices reaches 10 chapters deep... I wonder if it would be unfair to ask Gina And Marcie to take a look at it :D
     
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