Masochist mode review of "Roxanne the Punk Princess" by Nathaniel Keam - Katie's saga. Might do more later. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-Read-"Roxanne-the-Punk-Princess"-by-Nathaniel-Keam.1584028
God damnit, Zeebop, we release on the same day again XD https://chyoa.com/chapter/Halloween-Hijynx,-by-vyksin.1584039
Thanks so much for taking the time to do this; it was fun! The critiques are definitely valid. I made the conscious decision to minimize review over content as I kept stalling on it in the past. I keep telling myself I'll go back and clean it up, but I've been plugging forward. Gina should really look at the Hot Stuff I collated for people not wanting the slow burn. They could have pushed on to 46 for some fun anal, 51 for hotel euphoria, but I figured the duo might like 78 more. Thank you again for the creative critique! -Vyksin (and no, I don't spell it right )
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"Tower-of-Voices"-by-TheLeherengin.1587180 Part 1. Will try to do more chapters next time.
No rush. Give it a month and it should be finished, but I don't know if it'll be at all your sort of thing.
I truly mean no offense when I say, I'm pretty sure it is very much not my sort of thing. I've honestly held off because I'm not sure I could give it a fair reading.
Part 2. Not sure how deep into this story I'll get. I'd like to cover at least a hundred chapters, to give it a fair shake. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"Tower-of-Voices"-by-TheLeherengin,-Part-2.1587428
Part 3. Probably going to end the review with part 4, but do leave a comment as to how you'd like it to go. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"Tower-of-Voices"-by-TheLeherengin,-Part-3.1588023
Part 4. Just one more! https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"Tower-of-Voices"-by-TheLeherengin,-Part-3.1588507
Part 5! That covers the first 100 chapters. Maybe some day I'll read and review deeper. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Blaze-read-"Tower-of-Voices"-by-TheLeherengin,-Part-5.1588932
Sorry again, could have sworn there was more you hadn't covered , Still you did what was there with style. Also glad to see you think my writing has gotten better, or at least Gina does That was my first story after all.
That's good to hear. No, seriously I do think there is a substantial improvement if we compare the two stories., so you're definitely on the right track
