raziel83
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raziel83

Really Really Experienced, Male

I've got the inspiration for some snuff&non-con theme thing, but that would obviously not work on this site... Mar 29, 2026

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    1. raziel83
      raziel83
      I've got the inspiration for some snuff&non-con theme thing, but that would obviously not work on this site...
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    2. raziel83
      raziel83
      I still don't get the whole "the MC is an ugly loser" genre of smut that people seem to like *because they see themselves as loser*(?)
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Maybe it's "I'm a loser, but I know I'm not as bad as THAT sad sack of flesh, so if even HE gets to score, surely I will be able to as well"?

        If you're really insecure, maybe self-identifying with/as the hero/hunk/player becomes impossible. And then the next best thing is feeling superior to something, anything.
        Mar 18, 2026
    3. raziel83
      raziel83
      New year.
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        So it is.
        Dec 31, 2025
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    4. raziel83
      raziel83
      What if... Reality warping powers, but not for you? MC is near the epicentre and sees the changes, but they are not the ultimate power.
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      2. Impregmaniac
        Impregmaniac
        Would they be omnipresent, able to see all the alternate timelines, but cursed to only chronicle them, and not interfere?
        Dec 26, 2025
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        The easiest explanation is that MC can remember things before the omnipotent being (or someone with a genie or whatever) changed them. They would also have to be a coworker, school buddy or family member or otherwise near them so that they see the changes happening.
        Dec 26, 2025
      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        Issues: Most of these types of stories are about wish fulfillment so the usual fans would dislike this idea. this would more likely go more domination type story where the MC is the sub/victim. Or comedy. Comedy might work. "I'm minding my business and WHY DOES EVERYONE LOOK LIKE A BIMBO?!"
        Dec 26, 2025
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    5. raziel83
      raziel83
      I feel like writing something. ...But I am completely blanking on ideas.
      1. chris_brown
        chris_brown
        How about writing a follow-up to your "Double Damnation" chapter in The Lilith Strain?
        Nov 24, 2025
      2. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        An elf ducks through the door and says "Hide me, human!"
        Nov 25, 2025
    6. raziel83
      raziel83
      Read the blurb of a story. "this seems interesting." Look inside: "All typos."
      1. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        It is the rigidly organized mind that so often fails to think ouside the common routines.
        Oct 19, 2025
      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        When every single sentence has at least one word misspelled, it takes me off my mood. Can't help it.
        Oct 19, 2025
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    7. raziel83
      raziel83
      I have had a few ideas for stories. Was thinking about one of 'em, switched one detail around and now I have a whole new story idea from it.
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        True. But it is funny that this time it is not even based on any existing story since I am still just workshopping how the story would go.
        Sep 4, 2025
      4. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        Now the question is; do you make two seperate stories, 2 branches of the same story, or do you pick the one you like more and hang no.2 on the gallows?
        Sep 4, 2025
      5. raziel83
        raziel83
        I don't think this is one for Chyoa anyway. Either one I make, I would prefer to do a regular story without branches. And putting those on this site feels like a waste.
        Sep 5, 2025
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    8. raziel83
      raziel83
      Would anyone be up to collab on a story? I feel like it would be fun to take turns writing something for a while.
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      2. Regin34
        Regin34
        In what genre it would be that story? I would like to try some fantasy stuff.
        Aug 5, 2025
      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        Fantasy and incest are the main things that I write. (I can drop the incest for this collab if necessary.) I'm not actually sure *what* to write for this, but I'd be happy to brainstorm something once we can narrow down something we both would like to write.
        Aug 5, 2025
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    9. raziel83
      raziel83
      I rarely RP in chatrooms now. Today, I twice got a nice RP going, twice the partner left me mid-session. The theme WAS getting blueballed...
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        At least it wasn't anything personal. They said had some company come over suddenly. In fact, it was the same partner both times, they came back and we got the RP going on again nicely for a while. So I think they were honest that there was stuff coming up. I'm also quite bad with that which is why I so rarely RP via chat.
        Jun 29, 2025
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      3. Elfie
        Elfie
        Ah that’s fair! Sometimes stuff does happen and I always feel so guilty when I have to duck away! I guess that’s another advantage of play by post!
        Jun 29, 2025
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      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        It is. ...I should really try to find someone to play-by-post with. It is often easier to find a partner in a chatroom.
        Jun 29, 2025
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    10. raziel83
      raziel83
      Story idea, that I'm not sure if I have the energy to write: ghost couple possess random people so that they can fuck again. Hijinks ensue.
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        I think I prefer if the ghosts(daemons?) are mischievous and doing this to mess with people. Or basically roleplay their kinks with the people they selected as their targets. "Wanna do a nurse and patient next?"
        Jun 29, 2025
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        But ghosts always accidentally possessing people who are madly in love or otherwise would never harm each other, does make for comedy. It always leads into hate-fucking somehow.
        Jun 29, 2025
      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        ...And now even as I ponder this idea, I once again remember I had a thought of doing a "world tour of sex" story set in Warhammer Fantasy, with a Dwarf Slayer MC. Call it the "Dwarf Layer" as he strikes out old grudges and somehow ends up fucking elves and humans and other lesser species. (My main issue is that while the sex is fine on CHYOA, the violence would have to be watered down.)
        Jun 29, 2025
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    11. raziel83
      raziel83
      "I write for myself, I don't care if my writing is popular or not." but also "My chapter got two likes? AWwwww yeaaaaah!"
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        THREE likes!
        May 28, 2025
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      3. Remin
        Remin
        SWEEEET ENDORPHINS!
        May 28, 2025
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    12. raziel83
      raziel83
      I'm in the mood to collab on some story. ...But I myself don't yet know what story that would be. Anyone looking for something like this?
    13. raziel83
      raziel83
      Yet another succubus story idea... Not sure if I have the energy to write it.
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        Idea being that the daughter doesn't remember what happens while the succubus takes over her body and the father has to regularly fuck the succubus to remain in control. The succubus plays into incest kink and slowly corrupts the daughter, with plans to have the father and daughter have sex while she is not controlling the daughter as this would break the spell binding her. Or something like that.
        Jan 16, 2025
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      3. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Sounds like a good setup. What about the wife, what's she doing during all of this?
        Jan 16, 2025
      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        Undecided. If the wife is simply around, then the other characters would have to tiptoe around her, which adds to tension. If she gets involved, it could be because the succubus helps (or is forced to help) by making her more subservient to the husband. It would be a story about power dynamics that change as the husband and the succubus try to gain total control over the other. T
        Jan 16, 2025
    14. raziel83
      raziel83
      My net is buggy and when I tried to save a half written chapter as unfinished, I hadn't realized that the net is down and I lost all text...
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      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        Exactly, I tried starting again but I can't do it 100% the same and now I'm suddenly stuck thinking about a different way to handle the chapter...
        Oct 24, 2024
      3. Gambio
        Gambio
        Yeah, I would strongly recommend using a program like word instead and then just copy it over. Writing directly in the editor is risky
        Oct 24, 2024
      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        I have considered that before, but usually my net has been stable so I haven't had issues like this. This is a new problem that I haven't managed to fix.
        Oct 24, 2024
    15. raziel83
      raziel83
      I can't make up my mind on which of my ideas to write next. ...So I am stuck writing nothing.
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        If you're anything like me, you'll start working on a brand new idea in a couple of days.
        Oct 23, 2024
    16. raziel83
      raziel83
      Is there a freeuse story where misogynism is NOT the main point and where women also use guys? Bonus points if bisexuality is in it too.
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        See, Freeuse kink has potential, but it seems like too much of it is just "what if women weren't allowed to say no to me, a horny guy?" instead of exploring other ways it could work.
        Sep 24, 2024
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      4. Pasin
        Pasin
        Can't you just write one yourself?
        Sep 25, 2024
      5. raziel83
        raziel83
        In theory I could, but I was just wondering if there isn't one already. Also, I am already writing a fanfic and want that finished before starting another project.
        Sep 25, 2024
    17. raziel83
      raziel83
      Awww yeah... Checking the site and seeing that someone liked each of my chapters in one story. They were on a reading binge.
    18. raziel83
      raziel83
      I have 4 ideas for a chapter but also a writer's block and can't get started on any of them.
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      3. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Sounds like you need idea #5. ;)
        Jun 6, 2024
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      4. raziel83
        raziel83
        ...Now there is a fifth idea. Dangit.
        Jun 6, 2024
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      5. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Still blocked? Six! Keep coming up with ideas until you get one that makes you want to write. That's how you know you've got a really good one. :)
        Jun 7, 2024
    19. raziel83
      raziel83
      One of my favourite corruption tropes is "Seeing my friend raped by the monster, makes me want to let it take me." Hmm... Ideas...
      1. Orkiegirl
        Orkiegirl
        God that really is a mood
        May 22, 2024
      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        You can't overuse the idea or it becomes too cheap and easy. And you need some buildup (like the monster having pheromones or aura that excites people) but used sparingly it has made some hot scenes in a few stories I recall.
        May 23, 2024
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    20. raziel83
      raziel83
      There is a manga where a rookie adventurer is attacked by succubi and he panics and uses "beast taming" skill on them. And it sorta works.
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      2. MissNix
        MissNix
        What's the naame of the manga?
        May 13, 2024
      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        "Succubus Tamer no Isekai Musou" so it is a bit on the nose as is the trend nowadays.

        (for some reason, while replies on profile can be long, the original post I had to shorten a few times to make it fit.)
        May 13, 2024
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