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  • raziel83
    Trying to think of a way to write a mind control story without it immediately going to rampage with unlimited powers.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    So far I've been pondering about making the story be about "classic" fictional hypnosis. A slow process that is slow means that the subject is either willing or somehow captive for a period of time. That works as a limiter to what they can do even if they get power hungry.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Also thought of making the MC a woman, but now I fear again that I have violated too many core concepts of mind control stories and this cost me most of the potential readers.
    TheLowKing
    TheLowKing
    If you build it, they will come.
    raziel83
    I still don't get the whole "the MC is an ugly loser" genre of smut that people seem to like *because they see themselves as loser*(?)
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    TheLowKing
    TheLowKing
    Maybe it's "I'm a loser, but I know I'm not as bad as THAT sad sack of flesh, so if even HE gets to score, surely I will be able to as well"?

    If you're really insecure, maybe self-identifying with/as the hero/hunk/player becomes impossible. And then the next best thing is feeling superior to something, anything.
    raziel83
    What if... Reality warping powers, but not for you? MC is near the epicentre and sees the changes, but they are not the ultimate power.
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    Impregmaniac
    Would they be omnipresent, able to see all the alternate timelines, but cursed to only chronicle them, and not interfere?
    raziel83
    raziel83
    The easiest explanation is that MC can remember things before the omnipotent being (or someone with a genie or whatever) changed them. They would also have to be a coworker, school buddy or family member or otherwise near them so that they see the changes happening.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Issues: Most of these types of stories are about wish fulfillment so the usual fans would dislike this idea. this would more likely go more domination type story where the MC is the sub/victim. Or comedy. Comedy might work. "I'm minding my business and WHY DOES EVERYONE LOOK LIKE A BIMBO?!"
    raziel83
    I feel like writing something. ...But I am completely blanking on ideas.
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    chris_brown
    How about writing a follow-up to your "Double Damnation" chapter in The Lilith Strain?
    Zeebop
    Zeebop
    An elf ducks through the door and says "Hide me, human!"
    raziel83
    Read the blurb of a story. "this seems interesting." Look inside: "All typos."
    GyroscopicGraphite
    GyroscopicGraphite
    It is the rigidly organized mind that so often fails to think ouside the common routines.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    When every single sentence has at least one word misspelled, it takes me off my mood. Can't help it.
    raziel83
    I have had a few ideas for stories. Was thinking about one of 'em, switched one detail around and now I have a whole new story idea from it.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    True. But it is funny that this time it is not even based on any existing story since I am still just workshopping how the story would go.
    GyroscopicGraphite
    GyroscopicGraphite
    Now the question is; do you make two seperate stories, 2 branches of the same story, or do you pick the one you like more and hang no.2 on the gallows?
    raziel83
    raziel83
    I don't think this is one for Chyoa anyway. Either one I make, I would prefer to do a regular story without branches. And putting those on this site feels like a waste.
    raziel83
    Would anyone be up to collab on a story? I feel like it would be fun to take turns writing something for a while.
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    Regin34
    Regin34
    In what genre it would be that story? I would like to try some fantasy stuff.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Fantasy and incest are the main things that I write. (I can drop the incest for this collab if necessary.) I'm not actually sure *what* to write for this, but I'd be happy to brainstorm something once we can narrow down something we both would like to write.
    raziel83
    I rarely RP in chatrooms now. Today, I twice got a nice RP going, twice the partner left me mid-session. The theme WAS getting blueballed...
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    At least it wasn't anything personal. They said had some company come over suddenly. In fact, it was the same partner both times, they came back and we got the RP going on again nicely for a while. So I think they were honest that there was stuff coming up. I'm also quite bad with that which is why I so rarely RP via chat.
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    Elfie
    Ah that’s fair! Sometimes stuff does happen and I always feel so guilty when I have to duck away! I guess that’s another advantage of play by post!
    raziel83
    raziel83
    It is. ...I should really try to find someone to play-by-post with. It is often easier to find a partner in a chatroom.
    raziel83
    Story idea, that I'm not sure if I have the energy to write: ghost couple possess random people so that they can fuck again. Hijinks ensue.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    I think I prefer if the ghosts(daemons?) are mischievous and doing this to mess with people. Or basically roleplay their kinks with the people they selected as their targets. "Wanna do a nurse and patient next?"
    raziel83
    raziel83
    But ghosts always accidentally possessing people who are madly in love or otherwise would never harm each other, does make for comedy. It always leads into hate-fucking somehow.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    ...And now even as I ponder this idea, I once again remember I had a thought of doing a "world tour of sex" story set in Warhammer Fantasy, with a Dwarf Slayer MC. Call it the "Dwarf Layer" as he strikes out old grudges and somehow ends up fucking elves and humans and other lesser species. (My main issue is that while the sex is fine on CHYOA, the violence would have to be watered down.)
    raziel83
    I'm in the mood to collab on some story. ...But I myself don't yet know what story that would be. Anyone looking for something like this?
    raziel83
    Yet another succubus story idea... Not sure if I have the energy to write it.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    Idea being that the daughter doesn't remember what happens while the succubus takes over her body and the father has to regularly fuck the succubus to remain in control. The succubus plays into incest kink and slowly corrupts the daughter, with plans to have the father and daughter have sex while she is not controlling the daughter as this would break the spell binding her. Or something like that.
    TheLowKing
    TheLowKing
    Sounds like a good setup. What about the wife, what's she doing during all of this?
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Undecided. If the wife is simply around, then the other characters would have to tiptoe around her, which adds to tension. If she gets involved, it could be because the succubus helps (or is forced to help) by making her more subservient to the husband. It would be a story about power dynamics that change as the husband and the succubus try to gain total control over the other. T
    raziel83
    My net is buggy and when I tried to save a half written chapter as unfinished, I hadn't realized that the net is down and I lost all text...
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    Exactly, I tried starting again but I can't do it 100% the same and now I'm suddenly stuck thinking about a different way to handle the chapter...
    Gambio
    Gambio
    Yeah, I would strongly recommend using a program like word instead and then just copy it over. Writing directly in the editor is risky
    raziel83
    raziel83
    I have considered that before, but usually my net has been stable so I haven't had issues like this. This is a new problem that I haven't managed to fix.
    raziel83
    I can't make up my mind on which of my ideas to write next. ...So I am stuck writing nothing.
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    TheLowKing
    TheLowKing
    If you're anything like me, you'll start working on a brand new idea in a couple of days.
    raziel83
    Is there a freeuse story where misogynism is NOT the main point and where women also use guys? Bonus points if bisexuality is in it too.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    See, Freeuse kink has potential, but it seems like too much of it is just "what if women weren't allowed to say no to me, a horny guy?" instead of exploring other ways it could work.
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    Pasin
    Pasin
    Can't you just write one yourself?
    raziel83
    raziel83
    In theory I could, but I was just wondering if there isn't one already. Also, I am already writing a fanfic and want that finished before starting another project.
    raziel83
    One of my favourite corruption tropes is "Seeing my friend raped by the monster, makes me want to let it take me." Hmm... Ideas...
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    Orkiegirl
    God that really is a mood
    raziel83
    raziel83
    You can't overuse the idea or it becomes too cheap and easy. And you need some buildup (like the monster having pheromones or aura that excites people) but used sparingly it has made some hot scenes in a few stories I recall.
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