TheLeherengin
Really Really Experienced
Oh you meant like unfinished paths... Oh yeah working on those too.
Marcie and Gina read CHYOA
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sir oppenheimer
Virgin
I'm terrified of all the criticism you could give me, but intrigued nonetheless. I haven't read through all of your chapters, but I'm in awe of your motivation to continuously put out new content on the Cursed Punishment story so I'll offer up my own story in hopes it'll give some more motivation to you. Also, I'm hoping it will give me some motivation of my own to keep writing when I've slowed down to just barely enough to look like I haven't abandoned the story just yet.
I'd probably stick with the first option for every branch as that's probably better fleshed out, but the submissive branch (option 3 on chapter 10) starts out pretty good for some girl-on-girl domination scenes.
https://chyoa.com/story/X-Change-University.23411
Thanks in advance if you even bother to check out the story.
I'd probably stick with the first option for every branch as that's probably better fleshed out, but the submissive branch (option 3 on chapter 10) starts out pretty good for some girl-on-girl domination scenes.
https://chyoa.com/story/X-Change-University.23411
Thanks in advance if you even bother to check out the story.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Haha, thanks.
I usually don't start publishing until I have a lot of chapters available, so with Cursed Punishment i had a big headstart. I basically wrote the bulk of it back in November/December
Yeah, writers block sucks, currently experiencing this on my own, Luckily Marcie&Gina pretty much write themselves on their own.
I added your story.
TheLeherengin
Really Really Experienced
I actually waited until I had reached at least one bad end for each of the characters in Dustbin before even publishing it.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
This only makes sense if you know Gina's last name
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Galactic-Adventures:-Star-Wars,-by-Aqualis64.900249
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Galactic-Adventures:-Star-Wars,-by-Aqualis64.900249
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
If you get bored, you could always try the longest branch of LLNO.I think the last time you tried it, you hit a dead-end at 15 or so...but there's one branch that goes 31 chapters deep, and that's a bit of an emotional journey.
Might as well take you up on that, altough I would prefer to finish the current path first, so it's more consistent.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
It was very difficult to not make a Nuke joke.
https://chyoa.com/chapter/X-Change-University,-by-Sir-oppenheimer.903900
https://chyoa.com/chapter/X-Change-University,-by-Sir-oppenheimer.903900
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Probably worth mentioning that X-Change is a whole thing outside of CHYOA, but tends to focus on...short-form media. So that might account for some of the quick-acceptance there.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Yeah even on CHYOA there appears to be a second story on the same subject, had me confused greatly for a moment
sir oppenheimer
Virgin
Yep. A lot of inspiration on the setting came from this HTML game: https://tfgames.site/?module=viewgame&id=1521
sir oppenheimer
Virgin
Read through it twice and yeah, I agree with pretty much everything you wrote.
FYI, sir oppenheimer is spelled with a lower case "s"
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Read through it twice and yeah, I agree with pretty much everything you wrote.
FYI, sir oppenheimer is spelled with a lower case "s"
but that's grammatically incorrect, god damnit!
Too many people are agreeing with Marcie and Gina, so i'm actually offering up some special service, that will hopefully stop everyone from being so god damn polite.
New and improved guidelines:
https://chyoa.com/chapter/What-the-fuck-is-this-shit.877247
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
I do hope this is in the proper spirit of psychological ballbusting & soul-crushing: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-Lane-&-Blaze-read-Marcie-&-Gina-Read-CHYOA.905364
TheLeherengin
Really Really Experienced
Oh that is extremely tempting...
Part of me really wants to, but the question is... Ruby and who?
After all they only read Ruby's path so it would be weird to include any other characters, except maybe Claw... Since they did get one of his bad endings... Hmm... I will have to think on this.
Part of me really wants to, but the question is... Ruby and who?
After all they only read Ruby's path so it would be weird to include any other characters, except maybe Claw... Since they did get one of his bad endings... Hmm... I will have to think on this.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Luckily no balls to be busted with Marcie&Gina, but Gina got at the very least triggered and is now fantasizing about getting kidnapped for a hot threesome
Maybe best to wait for the follow up. I'm sure Gina and Marcie will have some choice words to say about Claw and his gang of nerds.
I see you added plenty to the story, so just give me a holler once you finished a path, or have appropriate enough content
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TheLeherengin
Really Really Experienced
Well... I have finished Ruby's day 1 content, but that doesn't add that much from what was there since Gina And Marcie's last review. The next major content addition I'm focusing on is Emily's day 1 content. So. I was thinking of offering that up once it's completed. It's going to be a while before there's any completely finished character content since There's probably going to be at least several days passing in each character path before we get to what I'm going to call the good ends for each character.