The Tower of Voices Voting Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by TheLeherengin, Mar 19, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Strong armed? More like strong tailed amirite?

    You know, having recently written a chapter for Slave Tournament that deals with painful anal torture via devil tail you just reminded me that I'm really not good at the whole sex writing thing.



    Looks like Goma got a free heal out of all this, so that's nice.


    Hm, so Cherchiel is with Aqua, that's not good.

    We don't really have any way of beating him in our current state. We could try to locate Lri and Isalia first but...lets be real they don't really move the needle combat wise.


    Emmie's suggestion is worthy of consideration. Getting, say, Lemiel on our team would be a massive power increase.

    The problem is, if the goal is still to kill Aqua, I don't think she would be enough either. So unless the tower above can literally frees our friends and returns our gear we have to negotiate with Aqua

    So, yeah my suggestion would be talk to Aqua first and see if we can come to an arrangement

    I have a feeling I know where this is going.
     
  2. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Well now I feel legitimately bad...
     
  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Hahaha, nah it's a known weakness of my writing. It was just a very funny contrast. I definitely think this was your harshest sex scene in the story so far.

    I think I have that particular devil as a guest star when Marcie and Gina do the next follow up for tower of voices lol
     
  4. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    XD sounds like fun.
     
  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Early post because I feel like it.

    Nice I wasn't expecting another shot at Lemiel and all it took was Yulia getting brutally raped three time in a row. The tower is a harsh but fair DM

    Me using traps? Why, perish the thought, Lemiel.

    So we are now officially on tower above team, right? I was expecting a bit more fanfare about that. Unless...Lemiel is a tsundere and is helping out of her own volition


    Well, it's good that Lemiel has an idea on how to defeat Aqua because I am drawing an absolute blank on that front.


    Fishking is probably not too happy about us wanting to fuck over Aqua, Should we try going to the mermaids first? We don't know where they are but since the ruins are the ony place left...

    The mermaids will most likely be neutral, so perhaps we can win them to our cause? They should be just as fucked as the Sirens, so maybe they would agree to an alliance?

    There is a small posibility that Lri is not with the mermaids, but I'd say that's worth the risk of not getting fucked by Dahlia again

    So my current gameplan:

    -get Lri, ideally mermaid alliance
    -fuck up the fishpeople, get Isalia
    -fuck up Aqua get Cherchiel
    -beat floorboss and get off this floor



    Also, I kinda neglected updating the map since I expected us to be almost done, but since that isn't the case...

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    Also, Also I love how Lemiel took the pose from the image XD
     
    Last edited: Jun 12, 2023
  7. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    :D
     
  8. Miss-Emmie

    Miss-Emmie Experienced

    Well, it's good to have Lemiel back! A solid and reliable vanguard is exactly what Yulia and Goma need right now.

    I disagree with approaching the mermaids. If Aqua did leave Lri with them, he probably gave them a reason to turn against us while he was there. If not, I don't think we know enough about them to try to form an alliance with them.

    It may be best to wait for the Sahuagin to make their move, if they haven't already. If they divide their forces to attack both of the other factions, that should leave their base sparse enough for us to sneak in and rescue Isalia. If it seems like they aren't committing their full force to an attack, we can attack them from the rear to give the other factions a chance to counter. We wouldn't even necessarily have to launch an overt attack, we could have Goma use Puppet to sow confusion in the Sahuagin ranks.
     
  9. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

  10. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Oh, wow I completely forgot about the whole water breathing thing. Ideally we would get Lemiel the spell as well, but we don't really have any equipment to spare right now

    What an annoying mermaid. Are we even talking with the boss or is this just the gatekeeper?


    "Listen up, bitch!" Goma, if she tries to interrupt shut her up with puppet.


    Yeah, we were working with the fishguys, killed the Kraken for them. Didn't work out so well, so we switched over to the Sirens, planned to give her Leva's pet even. Figured at least some hot lesbian dominance would be sexier then ugly fishguys in charge. Didn't work out so well either.

    So, now it finally comes to you, bigtits. Know what that means? You are our third choice. The absolute bottom bitches. The only reason we are even deigning to talk with you is a string of misfortune. The only reason you are right now not getting pounded by fishdick or eating Siren pussy is because we got fucking unlucky.


    You, have right now, an unbelievable once in a lifetime chance to turn your fate around. Place your fate in us and you might just come out on top.

    Or throw a tantrum and kill us. And spend the rest of your life motorboating fish dick.


    So, what's it going be, bigtits?
     
    Last edited: Jun 16, 2023
  11. Miss-Emmie

    Miss-Emmie Experienced

    Whoa, I think I'll be the Good Cop to Gambio's Bad Cop.

    First of all, I think using Puppet would be a bad idea. In addition to the one who's speaking to us, who is almost certainly just a gatekeeper, there are many watching us. If any suspect something, this will turn into a fight.

    We want to get Lri and get out of here. We have no issue with the Mermaids beyond that. After this, our goal is to free one of our comrades from the Sahuagin. Why should the Mermaids waste energy and manpower fighting us when we'll just take Lri and leave. Especially since we have our own beef with the Sahuagin. After all, we didn't give them the shells. They captured us while we were weak after fighting the Kraken and took them.

    I think Lemiel might also be able to talk us out of this. She is an agent of the Tower Above separate from our party. She can attest that Aqua the Salesman is trying to revive Levateinn, and that killing him will negate all of the magical items he's distributed. I'm sure Aqua warned the Mermaids about Yulia, and probably mentioned Goma, Isalia, and Cherchiel who were all sent elsewhere. But Lemiel is only here to confront the forces of the Tower Below.
     
  12. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced


    Lol goddamn XD
     
  13. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    The Lemiel option is solid, I almost went with something similiar as well since the Siren seemed more in line with the tower below with the queen wanting to become the next Levateinn and whatnot. So it would make sense if the mermaids would be camp tower above(fishguys are true neutral)

    I ultimately decided against it since I believe confronting them with the reality of their situation is more benefical. They are also the only group that hasn't attacked us so they are probably pushovers.

    But yeah nothing wrong with playing all our cards. Lemiel, try to look extra holy.

    Thank you. I'm at least 70% sure it won't get us killed
     
  14. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

  15. Miss-Emmie

    Miss-Emmie Experienced

    Calling Lri a friend is a strong word. She's more of a temporary ally we borrowed to get off this floor, and feel bad for getting her mixed up in all of this. We intend to take her and bring her along on a raid of the Sahuagin castle to rescue one of our actual friends, which would only be beneficial for the mermaids since that's one more thing for the Sahuagin to deal with.
     
  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I just realized that neither of the races is actually pure female/pure male. I mean I know you mentioned that multiple times but it somehow never clicked with me XD

    So the line about fish dick and siren pussy made a lot less sense then I intially thought.

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    For fucks sake, is your brain stuffed into your tits? It should be fairly obvious that we are proposing an alliance between Siren and Mermaids.

    I know the concept of basic strategy is too advanced for you to understand but instead of fighting a three way war it makes way more sense to have two sides unite to crush the third.

    Then you can all turn the fish people into your sissy slaves or whatever kinky shit your into.

    But obviously that alliance won't work out when you hold a Siren captive and do unspeakable, but nonetheless very erotic, things to her.

    Emmie has already laid out how this will work. You need to hold off the fishpeople here while we sneak into their castle and crush their king. We need Lri for that and you don't have time for lesbian femdom right now anyways.

    After that is all done we arrange the alliance for you. I'm a genius negotiator, so it will be easy.
     
  17. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Heh yeah... The line still sort of works though since Sirens are matriarchal and the Sahuagin are patriarchal.
     
  18. Miss-Emmie

    Miss-Emmie Experienced

    To be fair, our siding with the Sirens initially was pure chance. We chose randomly between the paths whose destination we didn't know, and happened to meet with the Sirens first. We were in a hurry, so we made our move against Aqua the Salesman without approaching the Mermaids as well. But had we chosen another path, we would have offered you this information and an alliance instead.

    Also, my partner here is a Loose Cannon. If you let our teammate go, we can get out of your hair. But if this turns into a fight, even I don't know what Gambio will do.
     
  19. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Oh nice, finally someone reasonable around here. Don't worry, I keep my word were getting that alliance sorted out easy enough.

    Hm, that was abou as sexually perverse as I was expecting.

    So, not exactly particularly resilient to sexual violence are you Lri? Don't worry, we saved you. Actually I did, Emmie wanted to go for Isalia first but I was all Noooooo we have to free Lri first, she is weak and useless and won't last long. Better be grateful.


    Speaking off, can the Goddess provide us with any intel on the war effort? The plan is to infiltrate fishpeople castle but ideally we want to this when their army is on the move.


    We do know the Siren are already engaged in combat. Is that the same for the mermaids? We should clarify if the fishpeople are waging a two front war or attempt to crush one opponent first